Posted by: wfloydk | November 23, 2009

The Struggle for Life

Cold sorrow looms over my heart,
seeking out all hope, destroying it
all along the way

Hope struggles to stay alive,
sprinting on light feet to
avoid being found

But the darkness is stronger

Slowly it locates all joy,
leaving me with nothing but
the agony of defeat

But yet, there is the slightest
glimmer, unscathed by this darkness
saving my soul

And this light is stronger


Responses

  1. Personally, I had been going through a lot of drama, as we highschoolers call it. During Chemistry class one day, while we had extra time, I had an epiphany: the slightest bit of hope that I had would result in happiness. So, why as a fellow man, would I choose to keep this though from the world.
    Also, expressing this truth in poetic form allowed me to really play with the syntax, and personify abstract nouns, bringing them to life in a new way.


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